The plot is very lively and interesting, but I have some personal suggestions that you could make options for the player to choose to speak different tones, Even if it doesn't change the ending of the story, I'd rather you could do it because I only play with text, which makes me less evocative. Or, in the boss fight, add some qte. I love this work and look forward to your creation
Do keep in mind, this was my very first big project. I did consider the idea of more interaction, but the work exponentially increases for a single dev like myself to add even small things like that. I experimented with the idea, but it would've easily turned a project that took me just over a year and a half to a project that would take me easily several years.
I have neither a team nor an inflow of revenue from this project unlike other VN writer teams. It's a passion project I make in my free time on the side of my life with really no help other than the very gracious volunteering of close friends of mine on some art.
I would love to create a more fleshed out project in the future, but realistically speaking those VNs you're comparing this one to were not only funded for with active donations, but they were also created by teams of people to handle the work load.
I'm glad you enjoyed the writing. That's definitely the part I enjoyed the most with this all. If you happen to know anyone or you yourself want to volunteer to help with future VNs, I'd be more than happy to accept the help if the skillset matches. My discord is @needs_bear.
Thanks for create such a wonderful vision novel. I'm sorry for hearing about the donation but I'm still a student that couldn't afford to support you. So i write down this comment to encourage you, hope to give you some company.
Wish you good luck and have enthusiasm to finish this great fvn.
Please don't worry at all about donating. I am so grateful for you playing the game and giving such a kind comment.
I released this project for free for that reason. I'm happy to know the story is reaching people in a way that is accessible for all. Thank you for playing and your support!
Damn, such impactful writing. The characters are vivid and the plot feels unexpected, terse, and realistic.
The part where the two main characters got into conflict portrays the mixed emotions both of them felt due to the circumstances they're caught in perfectly. I also love how the boss fight wasn't any more significant than its immediate consequences, really glum but feels painfully real.
I'm honestly so happy to hear your thoughts about the ending conflict and its lasting effects after! It's a type of writing I don't normally get to do, and I'm glad to know it landed the way I hoped it would.
There is a sequel in the works now, but it's going a "released when it's ready" type project. I'm working on it on my free time as I can though don't worry!
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i think im halfway through the story but so far the story is good im enjoying it
so i just read the entire thing and woww its so good?? im impressed tbh (THANKS FOR NOT LETTING THE MC BE DEAD AND MAKING THEM TOGETHER ILY😛)
The plot is very lively and interesting, but I have some personal suggestions that you could make options for the player to choose to speak different tones, Even if it doesn't change the ending of the story, I'd rather you could do it because I only play with text, which makes me less evocative. Or, in the boss fight, add some qte. I love this work and look forward to your creation
Do keep in mind, this was my very first big project. I did consider the idea of more interaction, but the work exponentially increases for a single dev like myself to add even small things like that. I experimented with the idea, but it would've easily turned a project that took me just over a year and a half to a project that would take me easily several years.
I have neither a team nor an inflow of revenue from this project unlike other VN writer teams. It's a passion project I make in my free time on the side of my life with really no help other than the very gracious volunteering of close friends of mine on some art.
I would love to create a more fleshed out project in the future, but realistically speaking those VNs you're comparing this one to were not only funded for with active donations, but they were also created by teams of people to handle the work load.
I'm glad you enjoyed the writing. That's definitely the part I enjoyed the most with this all. If you happen to know anyone or you yourself want to volunteer to help with future VNs, I'd be more than happy to accept the help if the skillset matches. My discord is @needs_bear.
Thanks for create such a wonderful vision novel. I'm sorry for hearing about the donation but I'm still a student that couldn't afford to support you. So i write down this comment to encourage you, hope to give you some company.
Wish you good luck and have enthusiasm to finish this great fvn.
Please don't worry at all about donating. I am so grateful for you playing the game and giving such a kind comment.
I released this project for free for that reason. I'm happy to know the story is reaching people in a way that is accessible for all.
Thank you for playing and your support!
why am i crying? thank you for such a wonderful vn...
Thank you for playing!
uuuh? whats with the dots
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Damn, such impactful writing. The characters are vivid and the plot feels unexpected, terse, and realistic.
The part where the two main characters got into conflict portrays the mixed emotions both of them felt due to the circumstances they're caught in perfectly. I also love how the boss fight wasn't any more significant than its immediate consequences, really glum but feels painfully real.
I'm honestly so happy to hear your thoughts about the ending conflict and its lasting effects after! It's a type of writing I don't normally get to do, and I'm glad to know it landed the way I hoped it would.
Just finished this...and it was glorious...is there more?
There is a sequel in the works now, but it's going a "released when it's ready" type project. I'm working on it on my free time as I can though don't worry!